Dyvaith's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Human]

Not bad...

Some things to keep in mind:

Ease up on the gradients for the character graphics. If the arms are seperate from the torso (which they were) you should make sure that the colors don't end up looking too different. I don't know if you meant to make it that way or not, but it just looked a little weird.

Also, the movements of the arms kind of sucked when he was running.

Other than that, not bad at all. Keep it up.

Foxcato responds:

His arms were supposed to look like that.

What can I say? I haven't made any running cycles in ages, and so I had alot of trouble with it this time...

[The Abandoned Kitten]

Woah...

Yeah, so you kind of just...tweened a scene around, and made some text appear.

But, I don't care. It was good simply because you were able to draw a cat, and I suck at drawing animals of any kind...so you did better than I could have.

Good, like the rest of your stuff, even if it all seems pointless.

DAIRYDOG responds:

The cat took me hours to draw.

[Mario's Final Flash]

No.....just....just, no.

Heh,

Graphics: 0 because they're sprites.

Style: 3 because there wasn't anything particularly good about it.

Sound: 3 because it was something from a TV show, and it made no sense.

Violence: 1 because....well there almost wasn't any. I didn't see any blood.

Interactivity: 4 because it had a play/stop button which is uncommon in flashes.

Humor: 0....because that joke at the end was soooo taken from South Park.

Overall: 3 because I hated it.

Shawn1upProductions responds:

Graphics: Sprite movies there 16 bit, not much i could do there.

Style: Like i said WARNING: If you don't like Mario Films or Dragonball Z YOU WILL NOT LIKE THIS! So don't vote 0

Violence: What is it rated oh i know for everyone which means a three year old could watch it.

Interactivity: Thank You

Humor: It was off South Park? thanks for letting know

Overall: thats too bad

[preview of GOD (theater)]

............holy.........shit

So I sat there....for about 5 minutes......WAITING for something good to happen. And that's ALL??? Just two people talking?

I hope you know that the dialogue wasn't even funny. Because it really was just retarded (half the time I couldn't tell what the fuck you guys were saying anyway).

Thanks for wasting my time.

KDindustry responds:

When you see theater, dont expect much actions...

[Overkill Kills PacMan]

Waayy to slow

Way too slow and not smooth enough.

Increase the framerate.

Also work on the art itself; the beam the robot thing shot looked.........odd.

merlinspark responds:

yeah this was my first flash cartoon and it wasn't till I was about halfway through it that I learned the importance of higher framerate .. I intend to use a minimum of 30 fps in the uture .. thanks :)

[Staples of Insomnia]

Ugh...come on....

Couldn't you have put in a little more sound? Also everything was WAAAAY too slow. I mean, he was playing a video game and then stapled his eyes.....you could have made that last for 10 seconds and it would have been better.

And like I said, have some ambient sound.

Tre-Green responds:

So you like quickies eh? well i bet some corner of the street whore would suffice for you.

[Diablo II]

I'm putting what went through my head as I review

Graphics...* because it sucked.
Sound.....9 because the music was cool.
Interactivity...0 because there was none.
Style.....3 because there wasn't any...
Violence....4 because some people got hurt but it still sucked.
Humor....8 because it ws humorously pathetic.
Overall....4 because....I wanna put tryhat....oops I meant "that".

Why did Diablo just walk into his axe and stay there like a jew? What was he anyway? He was like a mix betweeen a pally and a barbarian...and a.......guy. He was short...and cartooney. Umm......umm......he umm....submit

Extar responds:

It's rather worrying that during the flash you were thinking that Diablo looked like a jew.