Some things to keep in mind:
Ease up on the gradients for the character graphics. If the arms are seperate from the torso (which they were) you should make sure that the colors don't end up looking too different. I don't know if you meant to make it that way or not, but it just looked a little weird.
Also, the movements of the arms kind of sucked when he was running.
Other than that, not bad at all. Keep it up.
His arms were supposed to look like that.
What can I say? I haven't made any running cycles in ages, and so I had alot of trouble with it this time...
Or...something like that.
Whatever, it was fun. Fun on a hamburger bun. Fun...and...something else that rhymes with fun.
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Wow...that was a hoot n' a holler.
It was as if, you took an animation that sucked completely, and replaced the suck with awesomeness! It's brilliant!
I just melted... No, wait....no I didn't.
Wow, you have even managed to disturb ME with this. Nice work. And as seems to be consistent in your animations, the Japanese music scared me.
You are very sweet, thank you.
Yeah, so you kind of just...tweened a scene around, and made some text appear.
But, I don't care. It was good simply because you were able to draw a cat, and I suck at drawing animals of any kind...so you did better than I could have.
Good, like the rest of your stuff, even if it all seems pointless.
The cat took me hours to draw.
I loved this, there should be more animations like this.
The plot, the art, the dialogue, the music, all of it was marvelous!
A hippie being eaten by a tree! I have always wanted to see that!
A bit odd, as far as the "plot," but I liked even that.
Heh, I read all of what you put in the "Author's Comments" section. It made me laugh. I believe you may have wasted your time typing that. I mean, no you can not expect people here to respect your opinions if they are different from theirs. I mean after all, this is Newgrounds; everyone here refuses to make any kind of review other than "lol yur gay dis falsh suxlol!" or "LOL DIS RAWKSSSS ROFL SO GUD!" so the LAST thing you can expect is for them to act rationally when they encounter an opinion different from theirs reguarding a subject they probably don't know anything about. But, I do applaud your effort.
About the animation, I liked the style, few people have done one quite like that. I am not completely sure but it looked like you did it mostly with the brush tool, and yet didn't make it look sloppy as hell. For that I also congratulate you.
I see also that you have made no other submissions here. Too bad, I would have liked to see more from you. Perhaps you'll submit more in the future? I do hope so.
Was a nice idea, but about 40% of the jokes didn't have much to do with the....deformity....of the Olsen Twins. And some of the jokes were unoriginal. Not saying you stole them, just that I have heard them many times on other spoofs. Plus, this was kind of a dark twist to the Olsen twin spoofs, and I wish you had taken it a little further, it just seemed to end with a dissapointment.
Now, about the animation itself. It was pretty good, but a bit...odd in some places. Especially the movement of the arms, it just seemed unnatural and a bit unrealistic. But overall it was pretty good.
Could have been improved, but I liked it.
Some of the best sprite work I have ever seen! Which isn't really saying much, since most sprite animations I have seen require little effort, but still, this was nice.
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